Sunday, August 6, 2017

Excerpt from Earthquake, as promised

This is a first draft. I haven't gone through it with spellcheck or anything. I hope you enjoy.

“Lightning is an advanced air skill that takes manipulation of air using earth or water for friction and fire as an accelerant. Meteorology and atmospheric sciences use air and water in the manipulation of the weather. Air mages often pair with earth mages to attack air pollution, just as water and earth mages often pair for other types of environmental damage containment,” Professor Fuentes added.  “These are topics for late this year and in your future studies, as well as for advanced students.”
Professor Tehranchi made eye contact with me and I sank down in my chair. “Miss Lake, please come down here.”
I heard a few groans from the other ad-pro’s as I stood up. I hated being the center of attention. This was not how I wanted the afternoon to begin.
“Miss Lake is an air mage,” Tehranchi continued as I stood next to him. “She is one of the strongest lightning wielders that I’ve ever seen, in fact.”
This was news to me, and I tried hard to keep my face neutral.  It almost sounded like Tehranchi, who was by all accounts an ogre, was complimenting me.
Professor Fuentes chuckled. “You’re embarrassing Sara,” he chided.  “But we’d love for her to give a little demonstration.” He raised his eyebrows at me and I suppressed a grin.
“What exactly would you like me to show them?” I asked.
“I know you’ve filled this lecture hall with lightning,” Professor Fuentes told me while projecting to the class, “but since it’s full of people, I thought you could make a few lightning spheres.  Maybe basketball sized. Professor Tehranchi can keep them aloft.”
Keeping them aloft would be easy. I’d never made that many small spheres at the same time before, but there was a first time for everything.  Heck, it’d taken me four tries to light the New Mexico desert on fire. I’d start small and go from there.
I’d progressed from needing to start them in the palm of my hand and grow them from a spark.  Looking past Professor Fuentes to Tehranchi, I raised an eyebrow at him just as a basketball sized lightning sphere popped into existence in front of me.  I sent it out over the ad-pro’s and held it aloft with my own air.  I felt air tendrils try to take it away, but I surrounded my sphere and kept control.  Confident that I could do it again, I did the same thing.  And then I made two at the same time. And four more.  I figured eight was enough to let Tehranchi know I wasn’t the scared little incompetent girl I had been in January.
“Tired?” he asked, a little drollness in his tone.  I could hardly believe it.
“Nope,” I replied with a grin. I wasn’t.  I felt great.  “But I think you want to start lecturing again.” I winked the spheres out, nodded to them both, and retook my seat.
Clearing his throat, Tehranchi gestured to me.  “Sara is sixteen years old and in the adolescent program,” he said. “She is not available to tutor remedial students even though she is in my advanced air class, and,” he shot me a glare with a hint of mirth, “evidently she’s been holding back.”

Copyright 2017 Andrea Irving, Colindrea Press

:)

Friday, August 4, 2017

Earthquake

It's going to be longer than I thought, I think.  I'm at 34,000 words now (122 pages). Chapter 16. I thought it'd be shorter than Wildfire by a longshot. Wildfire was 70k words or so. I thought Earthquake would peter out around 50k words.  I'm thinking it's going to be closer to 70k. Not a bad thing. The pace is a lot slower, that's for sure. There's a lot of normal teenage life so far, which Sara has missed out on. They're back in Montana and school has started.  It's going better and worse than they could have hoped!

I'd be farther along if fewer RH books had been coming out over the last few weeks. No end in sight through the end of September. It takes a lot of willpower to get my nose out of a book and my fingers onto my laptop keys. Thank you for your patience. I still write faster than GRRM.

Sunday, July 30, 2017

It's still going great

I never know how long my novels are going to be.  50k words at a minimum is what is "recommended," whatever that means.  In this day and age, it's not as important.  At about 250 words per page, that's 200 pages. I'm nowhere near that in Earthquake, but I've made a huge dent in what I wanted to get done. The plot is rolling on, and we've got a new person's POV in chapter 12. Hmmm, I wonder who it could be? He's chattier than I thought he'd be, that's for sure! There will be more supporting character POV chapters going forward, as well.

I've also gotten the final edits from beta readers for my smutty novella. I finished the covers for that today, as well as finalized my pen name. As soon as I do my own final edits and final read-through, I'll be uploading that. You'll be able to find it if you search for my publisher's name, if you're interested.

I spent some time looking at more images for Earthquake and Rarity, too. Photoshop is... fun? I'm not an artistic person.  Obviously my covers are very basic.  Earthquake is going to tax my limits.  I may have to alter a stock photo for Rarity. It depends on what I end up choosing.  I try not to do too much, since I know that is not where my talents lie.

I spent way too much time on shutterstock today. Or maybe not...

I hope your summers are going great!!

Tuesday, July 25, 2017

6000 words later...

I'm sitting in my office at the clinic where I work, so I thought I'd post an update. I'm about to hit 6000 words (250 words/page) since I said I was buckling down and writing.  I think it'd be more, but I hit a snag last night and it was painful to get through.  It should edit fine later, and I'm excited to be past it. I've written a thousand words in between patients today, which I think it because we're finally hitting the part in the story where the plot takes off and it reels you in and gets good. I hope.

So I just wanted you to know that while Earthquake will be late coming out, it shouldn't be too late.

Sunday, July 23, 2017

I'm sitting down to write right now!

I am behind schedule.  I think writers are almost always behind schedule.

I went out of the country on vacation. Part of our vacation was spent in a lake cottage.  I assumed (ha!) that I'd be able to chill and write.  I got maybe 1000 words out. Everyone wanted to be social, and it's very hard to concentrate and write when people are trying to carry on a conversation with you.  How dare they, right?! I got a bit more done on the way home on our layover.  My 12 hour layover that turned into 16 1/2 hours. After a long day of seeing the historic sights in Philly (what we had planned for such a long layover), I was exhausted. I wrote some variation or other of "Sean is a dick" 3 times in as many paragraphs.  I conceded to my fatigue, and turned off my laptop.

Interesting things that happened:

On our way to our destination, we flew over Kalispell, MT. I got to see exactly where the Montana School is. My husband just shook his head at me. My 7-year-old was not impressed. My 4-year-old was asleep. But I was excited. Glacier National Park is just gorgeous. From the air anyway. I've never been there in real life.

I get to write off a lot of this trip on my taxes.  Part of Book 3 or 4 in The Program will take place in Philadelphia. That was my son's input. He was excited that I was taking his opinion into consideration. He hopes you like his choice when those books are written.

I ate my weight in poutine.  The 7lbs I gained... Well, I know where they came from, and I'm not sad about how they came to be.

I love paddle boards.  So relaxing. Man do they work out your core! All that balancing.  Same with kayaks.  My thighs burned. I think these activities are why I only gained 7lbs.

They make Olympic (and Paralympic) medals at the mint in Canada. They also make Star Wars and Avengers coins there, too. I saw a coil of gold ribbon that was worth like a million dollars.

We rode on a regional train, 2 subways, a bus, a car, someone else's car, the SkyTrain, and 2 airplanes all in one day.

I prefer Cheezies to Cheetos, Smarties to Rockets, and Canadian Smarties are just meh. I love Jujubes. I wish they sold Alexander Keith's in the US; I'll have a Kiltlifter instead though and be usually as happy drinking it.

Fidget spinners were on sale for $3.99 Canadian at GT.  My 7-year-old's mind was blown when we told him that was half what he'd spent on the glow in the dark one he got at home.

Tim Horton's jelly donuts are excellent.  There are lots of Dunkin Donuts in Philly. AZ does not have many donut places at all.

OK, I'll stop.  Thank you for your patience. I'll just get back to writing....

Tuesday, June 13, 2017

I'm still here, I swear!

Apologies for not posting in so long.  I haven't been up to much. I did crank out a 21k word smutty novella that I may publish under a nom de plume at some point. Sadly, I read a lot of that genre, and it's pretty repetitive. I'm poking fun at a lot of the more common themes you see nowadays. We'll see how my editors like it. I've never written anything like it before (maybe some steamy fanfic like 15 years ago), and I'm not sure how the humor will come across. We shall see. If there's interest, I'll post the pen name.  Once I finalize it. I'd rather my students, patients, and family members not read something of that nature. I'd never be able to look anyone in the eye again!!!

I did just write about 2000 words in Earthquake tonight. I'll be writing more tomorrow. I haven't been super inspired, so I've been going through a bit of writer's block.  I'm hoping that's done because I'd love to be finished writing Earthquake before I go on vacation with my family next month. The current plan (and it was the old plan before I started to feel ambitious) is to get Earthquake published by the end of August. I'm hoping to have at least half of Rarity written by then to put me on track to publish it by February at the latest. I know this will disappoint some of you, and I am sorry for that. Since I don't write full time, it comes in fits and starts when I can fit it into my real life.

Speaking of real life, I'm performing in a ballet recital this weekend. So other than tomorrow and maybe Friday morning, I'll be a dancing fool.  Here's to hoping I'm productive when I can be!!

Sunday, May 14, 2017

Happy Mother's Day!

To all my readers who are moms or have moms or know a mom! This includes fur babies.

I've been hard at work this weekend. I do have two sons, aged 7 and 4, so this weekend has been pretty much all about me. They've mostly left me alone, which I'm always appreciative of.  But that doesn't mean they haven't snuggled up to me making me only able to type with one hand. Very, very slowly. So I've been able to write about 60 pages, which I'm sure you're all thrilled about 😄

Until next time.